Martin family birthday breakfasts followed a strict tradition. First, there were Belgian waffles, made by Belinda, the beloved Hopewell Hotel cook. These were served up with an array of toppings: chocolate syrup, fresh lemon whipped cream, stewed strawberries, and powdered vanilla sugar. The air should have been thick with wafflely perfume. Instead, there was an acrid, confusing smell, undercut by a light touch of smoke.
I meant to write much earlier than this (ack!)
I have been talking once more with my publisher upon the dread topic of editing and have maintained my enthusiasm about the possible (and necessary) improvements and cuts – all the massaging, the re-writing required to make worth the read. In the editing of Book 1 I was astounded how much the removal of a sentence (or paragraph or page), the addition of a word or a line of dialogue, the revisiting of an idea that occurred at the front of the story again at the end – all this – could make for such a better story, tighter, more compelling. People who have read the un-edited 1st draft and the actual finished book will tell you that it is the same story just “smootherâ€, “betterâ€. That is what a good editor can do for a text – point you in the right direction and leave it up to you to make the new ideas work (or not…)
So after all the angst of earlier posts, here I am on the flip side, all excitement and eagerness. It that old creative rollercoaster. Still the actual labours of rewriting Book 2 have yet to begin – tears shall flow again, perchance. I’ll keep you posted…
In the meantime I have begun the illustrations for another Fantastica series for Omnibus & Scholastic, where I get to do 4 full-colour covers and about 50-odd b&w drawings, and it has actually felt like a holiday. It has been a goodly while since I have just illustrated without it being attached to my writing and, as much as I like writing, the hiatus is very welcome. A chance to “recharge†perhaps. Along with this I have completed a painting – a long overdue wedding gift for my cousins up in Brisvegas (read: Brisbane). It has been a delight (!) to get back into painting after such a lengthy break – nice to know I have not forgotten how to push a brush about a canvas..
I am sometimes torn as to whether I am more a painter or writer. Once I would have said the former without hesitation, but now I am not so sure: drawing certainly comes a little easier than writing, though I look forward to what I hope will be an increasing facility with words. Writing is new and exciting, hard and stretching, drawing is familiar and relaxing, still hard but comfortable too. I just might be both at once. *shrug*
On a genuinely personal note: my father’s birthday has just been and gone, a birthday (with party included) of particular numerical significance; though in respect I shall not declare his newly achieved age. I might, however, just say that if I look as good as he at his age I’ll be a happy chappy. Happy Nth Birthday, Dad! (I am glad to have inherited his genes…)
Thank you to Master Lethcoe for continuing support, look forward to a continuing correspondence beyond Inside A Dog (please refer comments to prev. post). Once again, thanks to you Laura for encouragements.
Finally … a down side of the weekend has been that I have not done so well in the listen first/speak second department: more like lots of mouth flapping and little ear usage. Ah well, there is always tomorrow and another chance to get it right – working new and better habits is not always as straightforward as I would like. ‘They’ say it takes 6 weeks to form a habit – I think the idea of breaking an old habit is not so much to resist it but to form a better one in its place. Hmm, more pithiness … how did I get on to this anyway..?
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Sheesh, you have an excited blog and no-one comments! Well, I’ve started the book and already I fear for Rossamund. “Don’t get on that cromster!” I silently yelled. My son said “Sometimes you get on the wrong boat and you ruin your life,” (shrug). So encouraging! DM, I’m also reading “Crime and Punishment”, sort of back and forth, don’t know why. They’re both gripping in their own ways, scarey and totally human. I also love the ribbons in your book - very helpful for a reader like me.
consider yourself as an “Artist”. That was you can create both books, and paintings… both masterpieces of an artist. Don’t bother about labelling yourself…
I am who I am. We are who we are; we need labels, but perhaps they need to be applied loosely. Perhaps it is not labels that are the issue but peoples’ responses to them that counts - “don’t judges” and all that. What a delightful insight from your son (!!!), Joanna - those pesky life-ruing wrong boats; and thank you once again for your excellent insight into the geography of the Hc. I hope the next post answers it properly … & I love ribbons too, that’s why the ANZ edition of MBT is my favourite - it’s just how I wanted it to be.
The cold slippery swan sex mass of your chin, and then with the sting out.
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Finally, she hesitated. She respondedopening her breast, just stared ???? ????? ???? at me to hang there. Oh.